CRAFT Writing every
day? What I propose is that you should (barring extreme circumstances) INTERACT with your work every day. If you can actually write on it, great! If you just can’t summon up any creative juice, do something else connected with your project. Some things I do are: • Reread
over what I’ve already written. Sometimes it inspires me to start writing,
even if it is only a paragraph or two. Sometimes I see editorial flaws and
fix them. Sometimes I just enjoy the story I have written and feel good
about having written it. When to add
facts? My tendency is to look it up if I know it’s a fact I have somewhere and I know where to get it easily. If it’s something I know I need to research, I’ll make a note of it and continue writing. Many writers will say they merely plunge along and leave out the details but this is another instance of personal preference. If you do leave them out, mark them in some way so that you remember to fill them in later. Infodump Of course your reader needs to know this stuff. It wouldn’t be very good historical fiction without historical details. And you did a lot of research! Dreadnoughts are fascinating! But it is jarring and often downright boring to read straight facts. There are much better ways of integrating this information. Perhaps
your hero meets a salty old sea dog who shows him the ropes (literally!)
Perhaps your pressed hero works as a cabin boy and overhears two captains
reminiscing over brandy. Less is more! History is part of the setting; it
should blend into the background. You are not writing a textbook. Yours is
still meant to be a good story above all
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Last update: 24 May 2006
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